You've got that WIP appeal, so WIP it on me...

Here's a minor project that I'm currently working on as part of an online contest among Blender users. The prize is a little more than name recognition within the Blender community, so let's see if that matters in the long run. 

The theme of the contest is "ten". The "ten" could be a score, an amount; anything. But whether it's an animated short or a still illustration, "ten" has to be the theme. So, I slapped together a few elements and came up with this... 

That isn't too weird, is it? Should I zoom in a little more? Or perhaps zoom back? Should I come up with something else? Or maybe not even bother? What's your opinion? I'd like to know.